( ) Content:
( ) Promise a benefit. Tell the reader what's in it for
him.Promise her increased sales, decreased expenses, a better bottom line. Tell them how you can help them. Period.
( ) Get right to the point. People don't like to wade throughpuffery. Stick to benefits, facts and features.
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) Give additional benefits. Show additional value other than main benefit. Auxiliary sales. By-product uses.
( ) Give product/service features. Don't brag. Support benefit promises with product/service facts. Show how your
companywill help his.
( ) Style:
( ) Be 'you' and not 'I' oriented. Use words like you, your,your company so that the reader feels you are writing for him.
( ) Get the readers involved. Ask them to answer questions,check off
boxes, make notes, jot down figures.
( ) Write clearly. Make sure your reader doesn't have to thinkabout what you're saying. Points must be understood immed-iately.
( ) Be concise. Use words judiciously. Make each word count.
( ) Be believable. Make sure your claims or representations appear to be realistic and believable. Don't promise a 990%increase in sales because most people won't believe it...even if it's true!
( ) Ask for action. Ask the reader
to place an order, return a sales card, phone for an appointment. Most sales lettersfail to do this.
( ) Refer to satisfied customers. Adds credibility. Let thereader know he can call so-and-so for a referral. Mentiontrade
affiliations.
( ) Visuals:
( ) Letters should be typewritten - never typeset. Typewriting gives your letter a personal feeling. Use an easy to readfont. Sign letter in blue ink, use rich stationery, notplain paper.
( ) Use a
headline. Before 'Dear Jack' type a headline. It should capture attention, spark interest and promise abenefit.
( ) Use subheads. Break up your letter with subheads to make points stand out more. Sub-heads can promise additional
benefits or back up claims with product/service facts.
( ) The P.S. is critical. One of the highest read portions of a letter. Use the P.S. to reinstate a major point, ask foraction, indicate a free gift or deadline for your
offer.
( ) Appeals:
( ) Understand that people are emotionally motivated. Realizethat people want to:
( ) Make more money
( ) Save money
( ) Work easier
( ) Achieve
( ) Take more time off
( ) Be secure
( ) Do a good job
( ) Experience love
( ) Have a satisfying home life
( ) Get something for free
( ) Try something new
( ) Towards that end, use words like:
( ) Free
( ) New
( ) Now
( ) Money
( ) Limited time only
( ) Special price
( ) Special Techniques:
( ) Never use a one-page letter. Looks skimpy. Ideal length is 2 or 4 pages (11x17) folded to 8.5x11 for business-to-business mass mailings.
( ) Use plenty of attention-getting devices to guide readers:
( ) Bullets
( ) Dashes
( ) Check boxes
( ) Solid boxes
( ) Numbers
( ) Asterisks
( ) Arrows
( ) Give reasons to act now. For example: limited supply,
two-week sale, special purchase. Retailers -- check localtruth in advertising laws.
( ) Offer something for free. Free gift with purchase. Buy two, get one free. Retailers check local laws.
( ) Give expiration. If you don't motivate people, they'll take forever to call or order.
( ) Repetition. Repeat benefits throughout letter. Present thesame ideas and benefits in different ways.
( ) Pricing. Key point. Test
several different prices in yourletters. $19 or $19.95 always sounds cheaper than $20. Offer 3 for the price of 2 and other pricing devices tomake prices appear to be cheaper.
( ) Use a 'newsy' approach: 'After 3 years of
development, we offer you increased performance.'
( ) Challenge the reader: 'Don't let your competitors get the edge this season...'
( ) Ask the reader a question: 'Are you paying too much for your printing and typesetting?'
( ) Never end a sentence at the bottom of a page. Always make it so the reader has to turn to the next page to finish thesentence.
( ) Be logical, use common sense. Don't try to fool anyone - they're usually too smart for that.
( ) The tone of your letter should be:
( ) Warm
( ) Sincere
( ) Honest
( ) Helpful
( ) Authoritative
( ) Friendly
( ) Put yourself in the reader's place. Note your reactions while reading the letter. Have your spouse,
friends andassociates give you their honest opinions. Listen to anyand all comments. Re-write any portions that turn othersoff.
( ) To accentuate important statements:
( ) Underline
( ) Use exclamation points
( ) Use all capital letters
( ) Highlight with a second colorBrowser Fixed